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Come take my hand, and let us enter deep Into a world where only lovers know You’ll count each kiss instead of counting sheep And fall asleep to heartbeat’s shining glow I take your hands and bid them do my will The scents beguile you, and I see you smile The tresses of my hair on chest I spill With naked form I warm you all the while I feel you wake, desiring now to taste Lush fruit of passion, glistening ripe for you You eat your fill of love that’s cherry laced And sink yourself much deeper into dew You sleep again, an angel at my place I write these lines while gazing at your face Roya

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Date: 7/25/2014 8:37:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this lovely poem of yours this morning Eileen. Do not hide behind your feelings when sad. If you do you are cheating yourself and your poetry. Be yourself and let it all out. :) Carol
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Date: 7/20/2014 8:44:00 AM
A passionate smorgasbord, I loved it, after all I am partial to desert.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/20/2014 10:18:00 AM
Oh....my favorite part too, Richard. Sweet sweet sweet! ;)
Date: 7/19/2014 10:04:00 PM
This is good heat..." You eat your fill of love that's cherry laced, and sink yourself much deeper into dew..." I like angel cuddle. J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/20/2014 10:19:00 AM
Angel cuddle...Justin, what a lovely expression. Superb! I love the lines you chose...Thank you for visiting me. I miss you when you don't by.
Date: 7/19/2014 3:39:00 PM
Hi Eileen, I like it when you are in this type of mood. Your pen and tresses have one thing in common...they provoke and tantalize! // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/20/2014 10:24:00 AM
Oh Paul....provoke and tantalize... :) HUGS for that! Loved it!
Date: 7/19/2014 11:42:00 AM
Hi Eileen: Ican feel the passion flowing, especially "fall asleep to heartbeats shining glow". GREAT WRITE!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/19/2014 2:57:00 PM
Thank you, Ralph. I'm glad you liked these lines. To know that my writing is appreciated gives me exquisite joy.
Date: 7/19/2014 11:23:00 AM
I see you found your passion muse....I love theses sensuous writes Eileen....hugs Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/19/2014 2:58:00 PM
Passion is my middle name...Thank you for your visit. I thought the last two writes were rather morose, and so.....I just had to write something. Yes...this one was a must do write...I'm glad it came out well. It was an exercise in writing...Thanks for the visit, Tim. Hugs

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