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I Wondered

Last night I lay in the darkness of my room like i always do Me, a dim lamplight and thoughts of you my only companions Everything was still Till I could listen to first pit pattering of raindrops Upon my. Windowsill Falling, falling gently down my amber rose leaves garden. Falling gently ,wildly, gushing , drumming, Like your heart beat on those scented nights in the hallway by the fireplace, face to face I wondered if water shadows were there too In a distant land, in another path and in a different time I wondered if you think of me too,over a cup of tea whilst reading your newspaper, or just sitting in your porch..I wondered.. Last night I sat, staring off into space. My newspaper not opened. My lemon tea gone cold. Everything so still, until the rain started to fall, dripping slowly, rhythmically, then faster, faster, harder, harder, quicker, quicker splattering onto the broken concrete sidewalk pounding like the beat of my heart when we cuddled under the moonlit sky. I wondered do you ever think of me does the moon bring back memories do you lie awake at night in your room dreaming of me....I wondered..

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Date: 1/17/2015 6:57:00 AM
I wonder as I wonder out over the plain and Raindrops keep falling on my head keep reminding me of what you just have written. It is truly amazing what motivates us to write the right poems. Right? Everyone else thought this one was your best one. As your poem will float by, They may love it and so do I. Jim Horn James Thomas Horn
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:37:00 AM
First A7, this is so enchanting and beautiful, I do feel a bit sad, I will need to take some poetry Viagra to be able to stand up to this level of writing!!!!!
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Date: 10/31/2014 9:30:00 AM
Welcome to the soup, I am truly impressed!
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Date: 10/28/2014 10:45:00 PM
Love your write, I can hear the sounds of the rain making and smell the clean fresh air it leaves behind. :) eve
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Date: 10/27/2014 11:50:00 AM
You have to keep writing...I want to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Excellent, excellent and excellent skill.
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Date: 10/26/2014 3:28:00 PM
I really, really, really, really like the two poets who wrote this. I really, really, really, really like this.
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Date: 10/26/2014 5:59:00 PM
Tell me what you really think :.)
Date: 10/26/2014 5:30:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Cupids- I choose your first beautiful written poem - I like it a lot!! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/26/2014 5:50:00 PM
Thank you A-L :.)
Date: 10/25/2014 7:50:00 PM
I applaud this excellent piece and extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! I wish you happy writings, my friend! Pandita
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Date: 10/26/2014 5:45:00 PM
Thanks Pandita :.)
Date: 10/24/2014 8:51:00 PM
Very bautifully penned! Love the beat to this read and the depth of your thoughts! You also paint an awesome picture with your descriptions! Bravo! Please read my page ok? ty
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Date: 10/25/2014 6:33:00 PM
Thank you Suzanne
Date: 10/24/2014 8:11:00 PM
truly beautiful congratulations excellent piece
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Date: 10/25/2014 6:30:00 PM
Thank you liam
Date: 10/24/2014 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations Cupids on being featured as poem of the day. Verlena
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Date: 10/24/2014 8:04:00 PM
Thanks Verlena
Date: 10/24/2014 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry of the day.
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Date: 10/24/2014 8:05:00 PM
Thank You Brenda my dear friend :)
Date: 10/24/2014 3:35:00 AM
WOOHOOOOOOOO poem of the Day well done both:-) Hugs Jan xxxx
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Date: 10/24/2014 8:06:00 PM
woohoo :)
Date: 10/24/2014 2:35:00 AM
- I enjoyed the poem of the day :) - Congrats! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/24/2014 8:08:00 PM
Thank You A-L hugs ;)
Date: 10/23/2014 1:07:00 PM
I heart this poem, "water shadows" did it for me, I imagine water stains on a ceiling belonging to young lovers poor in money rich in love.
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Date: 10/26/2014 5:43:00 PM
Thanks Dan
Date: 10/23/2014 8:06:00 AM
So so romantic and beautiful. I love this piece. Warm Regards "B"
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Date: 10/24/2014 8:11:00 PM
Thank You "B" ...hugs Tim
Date: 10/23/2014 6:14:00 AM
a romantic dream of a poem - amazing imagery - its simply fabulous:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/24/2014 8:11:00 PM
:)
Date: 10/23/2014 3:13:00 AM
I am favouring this beauty..The respose lines to the first part are a killer.Sooo Romantic !! :.)
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Date: 10/26/2014 5:44:00 PM
:.)
Date: 10/22/2014 7:44:00 PM
I enjoyed this, very well written ;)
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Date: 10/22/2014 6:17:00 PM
Well wonder no longer, I dream of you twenty four seven and the bags under my eye are proof.......seriously I can't sleep! ;) This comment would be really awkward If you turned out to be a guy
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Date: 10/24/2014 8:13:00 PM
haha
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 10/23/2014 10:39:00 AM
OK! I won't blame the new avatar just my glasses! :) you're lucky a have a soft spot for beautiful women.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/23/2014 10:28:00 AM
You dream24/ 7 hmmm : ) ..Leave your new avatar ..No spiders pls..Leave it in the jar : )
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 10/23/2014 10:07:00 AM
I've been fooled, duped, it's not the first time and it would be the last I guess. I totally blame my new avatar!
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/23/2014 8:09:00 AM
Haha...half right
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/23/2014 3:12:00 AM
: )

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