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I Wonder If

Solid gray soft clouds slowly flow Southerly then they stop Is the rain about to pour down The clouds their moisture drop The crickets don't seem to mind much They sing in soft chorus But the roosters are quiet now No crows making a fuss I wonder if they wonder if The sun has lost its way Or if it refuses to work 'Pon such a cloudy day~~

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 8/4/2013 6:06:00 AM

Very nice, very nice! "I wonder if they wonder if..." my favorite line in this poem. Cause me to stop and wonder a bit. Good job with this one. MC

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2013 11:29:00 PM

Thank you for the soup mail Sara... xox~ LINDA

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/22/2013 8:43:00 AM

A very valid curiosity you present here. I like how you're making Mother Nature think a bit here. =)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/22/2013 8:34:00 AM

it is a pondering thought of what goes through their mind, of beauty they live their lived, if only they could tell us what they see, enjoyed your write, always, Linda

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/22/2013 6:18:00 AM

I wonder too what the animals think about such days, do they think the sun has surly been lost, will they ever see it again? I wonder if they think the sun will ever come back again, they've seen it come back before, but will it come back this time? These are good questions I love how you stated that the crickets don't care, they chirp all throughout the day...but the do so love love the night Sara! I just love this tremendous poem my friend! I enjoyed this piece, Great Work!!