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I Wish For You

a I hope that you will fly high like a bird. soaring above the clouds, high in the air. triumphant over alll your troubles. i hope that you shall always find your way to where you must go, and that you can be who you wish to be. i shall pra y for you every day. i hope that you will fly high like a bird. over com ing all ob sticles in you r way. i will do all of this because i love you

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Date: 8/19/2018 2:09:00 AM
I would love to be the recipient of this wish. Very nicely created..
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Date: 4/4/2016 12:12:00 AM
wow, great shape. LINDA
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Date: 1/30/2010 1:25:00 PM
This is an amazing write you have.you have a beautiful heart and a great artist too.And thank you so much for your words, i am glad you like my poems so much.i get worried at times, so your comments mean a lot to me.i will write more.heh. -Always Lynette
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Date: 11/30/2009 10:12:00 PM
Eleanore, congrats on your success in Deborah's contest...Raul
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Date: 11/30/2009 1:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Eleanore. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 11:00:00 AM
Eleanore, many congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest >> James
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Date: 11/29/2009 6:07:00 PM
Wonderful piece, Eleanore! Congrats on your success in Deborah's contest! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/15/2009 7:18:00 AM
Excellent piece and the artwork in incredible >> James
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Date: 11/14/2009 2:37:00 PM
Thanks so much for the entry! Love Soars as a title would make it more a concrete verse and less a shaped verse. PS if you put a . at the beginning of the line you can push you "I" over to the top of the birds head ;) Light & Love
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Date: 11/9/2009 7:19:00 PM
Very nice, i like this
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Date: 11/7/2009 3:04:00 PM
i can never do this..;)...nice and very creative
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Date: 11/7/2009 5:22:00 AM
Beautiful thoughts put to pen plus added bonus of the design. Those designs are very difficult to do. Keep designing and writing. Sara
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Date: 10/29/2009 2:46:00 PM
Uplifting poem. Wonderful visual effect. If you entered the contest with this creative poem, best wishes. Keep up the good writing. Much can be accomplished through prayer. Blessings, Karen
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Date: 10/24/2009 6:55:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Eleanore. I look forward to reading more of it. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love Carol
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Date: 10/23/2009 7:26:00 PM
nice image and poem. good job.
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