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I Was Wrong

the little noisy child , who used to be frisky and wild. with emotions so cheery and mild. the bright star of mothers eyes. is now hanging around with guys. once being so naughty,has now become knotty. on scolding who used to shut his mouth. has now grown into an uncontrollable lout. once beleived to become a martyr, has now become a gangster. "we raised you taking so much pain". but all that lecture went in vain. the steps taken along since so long , finally led to realisation,"i was wrong

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Date: 2/22/2016 11:22:00 PM
nice to see this one again, Sheetal, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/31/2015 10:21:00 PM
happy new year
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Date: 12/16/2015 4:10:00 AM
Sheetal, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/15/2015 3:14:00 PM
Hi Sheetal, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita
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Date: 12/15/2015 2:56:00 PM
Sheetal, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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