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I WAS CHALLENGED BY TIM SMITH TO WRITE THIS POEM:-)

Just one look at you and my pupils dilate I caress you with my fingertips and stroke you gently I hold you in my hands and undress you slowly I lick my lips and wish you were in my mouth You arouse me with your scintillating scent Dark, rich and smooth as silk Oh how I want you Simply cannot fight off this desire any longer I need you urgently Guess I better eat my bar of plain chocolate Jan Allison 21st August 2014

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Yasmin Artisticbutterfly33 Fekri

Date: 8/23/2014 5:39:00 PM

hahahah loved it !!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2014 5:42:00 PM

I did a few personification poems the other day - they were fun! Hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/22/2014 3:50:00 AM

Hahaha Sweet Jan..:) sultry way of eating chocolate huh..:D Weee!! Love it;)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2014 4:25:00 AM

thanks Olive I can thank Tim for this write:-) Hugs jan xxx

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 8/21/2014 5:15:00 PM

Are you that is all you want to eat? haha. Don't fool me. Good one, Jan lol

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 5:19:00 PM

I was challenged by Tim to write a personification poem about chocolate - this is the best I could come up with LOL:-) Hugs Jan xxx

James Fraser

Date: 8/21/2014 4:11:00 PM

Oh my! many a time I have said that. Sadly I put on weight. Now if I'd lived it the way people read the title, yep, I'd have lost weight ;) loved it Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 4:26:00 PM

LOL James you also need to read my poem 'you turn me on every day' lol Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/21/2014 3:49:00 PM

oh my that is yummy. I love chocolate! please share!!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 3:52:00 PM

Tim is responsible for challenging me to write this:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Aiyah Torres

Date: 8/21/2014 2:59:00 PM

wohoooo!!!! .it's gettin' hot in here.... haha... very well done.. I almost lick my tongue... Superb as always, Jan.. missed your cuteness and charm.. :") Love it!! ^_^

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 3:01:00 PM

Blame Tim Smith .... i do:-) ... he read my poem called 'You turn me on every day' and challenged me to write a poem about chocolate lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

J. R. Corbin

Date: 8/21/2014 1:49:00 PM

Yummy!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 1:51:00 PM

I can blame Tim for this write - he challenged me lol Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/21/2014 1:25:00 PM

Scrumptious and delightful Jan......hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 1:49:00 PM

ooh I bought some snickers yesterday they r cheaper than the Reeces and more readily available locally:-) I remember when they were called marathons originally :-( Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 8/21/2014 1:37:00 PM

I have a snickers bar every night at break...lol

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 1:34:00 PM

I've still got one plain choc Reese's Peanut Butter Cup in the fridge - i may succumb to desire now LOL... am loathe to eat it as it will be a few weeks before I get into the city again LOL hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 8/21/2014 1:29:00 PM

Mouthwatering Jan ....mmmm...I need a bite :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 1:26:00 PM

I hope I rose to the challenge you set Tim:-) Hugs jan xxx