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I Wander About

I wander about like a fish out of water in the surf blue sea Me a traveler in the congress of gray rocks where carcajous howl A vacant lot mind wavered in the breeze empty land soul never rests Heart sighs seeks haven warm breasts of the beloved in my country home I see the river boatmen singing love ballad flows out of water Out of Water - Poetry Contest Sponsor Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Date: 4/8/2015 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, my friend. How are you? Seems you've been away... Hugs! Kim :)
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Date: 4/7/2015 10:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend
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Date: 4/5/2015 6:22:00 AM
Lovely Haikus Rajat. Congrats. Mohan
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Date: 4/4/2015 7:30:00 PM
Lovely presentation of Haiku, Rajat. Congrats on your win! Sandra
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Date: 2/16/2015 9:03:00 PM
As J.R.R. Tolkien said, "Not all who wander are lost"... Sometimes we need a little freedom to clear the mind and rejuvenate the soul... A great set of haiku, Rajat. Well done! Good luck in Sheri's contest!
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Date: 2/16/2015 8:00:00 AM
Astounding haikus...especially the middle one.
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Date: 2/15/2015 11:40:00 PM
Another great pen dear friend... best for the contest... nad!
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Date: 2/15/2015 3:22:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work.. thanks for dropping by. Sara
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Date: 2/15/2015 12:25:00 PM
Lovely and creative string of haiku, Rajat! Loved them all; the first one has a touch of Grook. All the best my friend. // paul
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