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I Walk the Path - Etheree

rain dripping down my neck,I walk the path of golden leaves fluttering to earth smell the October frost is near turning these leaves to brown slush. the pathway now beware full of beauty yet tread carefully view not good lying there Penned 19 September 2015

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/3/2015 6:32:00 PM
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Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Etherees are delightful..Sara
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Skat A
Date: 10/2/2015 10:39:00 PM
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Seren, congratulations on your awesome Etheree win. <3 SKAT
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/1/2015 2:25:00 AM
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I enjoyed this one, Seren. Especially the first part's imagery. Congrats in my contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2015 11:57:00 AM
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Seren , a lovely write to accompany the image . Yes leaves mingled with rain can be dangerous and thanks for visiting my poem, obsession. ..
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/23/2015 5:35:00 PM
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thank you Broken Wings....Seren
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/21/2015 1:22:00 AM
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A unique and creative poem you have written for the Etheree contest Seren! Best of luck!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/23/2015 5:35:00 PM
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thank you Connie ....Seren
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/20/2015 5:07:00 AM
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eww I hate the rain running down my neck and the slippery leaves can be treacherous - great take on the theme good luck Seren:-) hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/23/2015 5:37:00 PM
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Thanks Jan...Seren

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