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I Walk on Water

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Below is the poem entitled I Walk on Water which was written by poet Connie Marcum Wong. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I Walk on Water

I walk on water. . . 
I feel the coolness of the
Rolling waves splash
Beneath my feet.
I watch the sun sprinkle
Diamonds across the sea.
I float above the clouds
And feel the radiant warmth
Of the sun bless my body.

I feel the power of the wind
Caress or twist and break
Anything into submission.
I rise above the towering Alps—
Snow capped and pristine.
I enjoy a fragile flower sharing
The faint scent of heaven.
I know the Sequoias, ever growing.
I blend with verdant pastures and
Serene rolling hills in misty rain.

I know the secrets of the
Deep dark abyss.
I sense the moon’s tenderness 
And share in her emotions.
I flow with the clever rivers
Seeking new exciting paths.
I form a rainbow in waterfalls.
I am free to be the wind, the earth, 
The sea, when all you see is me.

© 2010 Connie Marcum Wong

I am only inferring I am one with nature in this poem.

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  1. Date: 5/16/2014 7:35:00 AM
    So very beautiful! Had me dreaming of my favorite spot deep in the forest! Straight into my fav. it goes!

    Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 5/17/2014 2:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much Robert. It means a lot to me when someone likes my poetry enough to put it into their favorites. Mahalo Nui Loa (Hawaiian for Thank you very much), Aloha, Connie
  1. Date: 3/22/2014 7:48:00 PM
    this is SO glorious, Connie!! It had been one of my faves for sure.

  1. Date: 9/23/2011 8:57:00 PM
    This is beautiful Connie, your descriptions give the mind sublime feelings of peace. Do you know how lovely this is?

    Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 9/23/2011 11:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lizzy, thank you for such a special comment. I sometimes use this poem as a sympathy poem. Mahalo Nui, Connie
  1. Date: 11/11/2010 9:59:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Connie. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 5:11:00 AM
    Congrats Connie on having this poem selected in the P.S. contest first round competition.. good luck my friend in the next phase with luv..

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 9:42:00 PM
    YEAAA one of my favs is thru the first round. Congrats on your poem being in the big contest LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 7:14:00 PM
    Congrats on making it through the first round of the Soup contest with this wonderful poem, Connie! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/6/2010 10:28:00 AM
    connie, I think I may have seen all your poems here now. I've gone half an hour over the limit I gave myself. what else is new?? I better get out the door. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 5:39:00 AM
    Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Enjoy the honour. Love always, Adeleke

  1. Date: 8/3/2010 6:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Connie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/2/2010 8:47:00 PM
    Congrats Connie on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an excellent choice to share with us all.. with luv..

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 2:45:00 PM
    Thank you for your kind words towards my poem Vivid Color. Beautifully written this one, your metaphoric description vividly opened my imagination. Congrats also.

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 11:16:00 AM
    Congrats on being featured!

  1. Date: 7/6/2010 7:29:00 AM
    congrats on the feature poem!!

  1. Date: 7/6/2010 3:26:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Connie. May you have many more features. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 3:20:00 PM
    Lovely poem, and see and feel the images of a beautiful place, may we all be determined to keeping it so. Thank you for the poem and your comments. Take care.

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 11:22:00 AM
    Congrats Connie on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" .. AlohA..

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 11:21:00 AM
    i think you are from China, am I right

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 11:17:00 AM
    Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 7:31:00 AM
    Many congrats on your beautifully written piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette