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I Truly Believed

Fantasies fly fledgling feelings, far beyond infatuation. For when passion's flame ignites, it burns with pure exultation. Hypnotized by your sexy smile, I believed you truly loved me. And my altered reality showed me what I wanted to see. When we'd share intimate moments, all doubts would swiftly slip away. And yet, you weren't honest with me, deftly leading my heart astray. An eruption of emotions exploded in abject fury. And facing an onslaught of hurt, anger became judge and jury. Stunned by betrayal and deceit, I'm left on the verge of a tear. And as lies muddied the waters, my future was no longer clear. Despite all my trepidations, I admit, I will miss your charm. And when I'm tempted to forgive, my broken heart sounds the alarm. (Quatrain) 3/21/2015

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Date: 3/1/2018 6:19:00 PM
What a strong way to start your poem with a beautiful alliteration: "Fantasies Fuel Fledgling Feelings Far beyond inFatuation." And, Emile, your closing is as strong with "Yet though it’s hard to forget you it's harder to forgive the harm." Superbly done.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/1/2018 6:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Line, your visits are always most welcome. Emile.
Date: 3/23/2015 8:52:00 AM
oh emile how i relate to this pen as if it flowed straight from my heart bless you in such hurt no one deserves this judgement in loves name your in my prayers dear friend wishing you a blessed beautiful week
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Date: 3/23/2015 10:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Liam, your visits are always most welcome. Emile.
Date: 3/22/2015 5:58:00 AM
Your emotions seep through so beautifully Emile.. its amazing if you take a step and you really look at things not working out the way you hoped they would. When that happens I try and remember the good memories.. hope your day is a beautiful one ;)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/22/2015 12:38:00 PM
Thanks Wilma, I so look forward to your visits. Emile.
Date: 3/21/2015 12:19:00 PM
Hello Emile I enjoyed your creativity in I TRULY BELIEVE. SUPERB. Glad you are with PoetrySoup. VB Rogers
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/21/2015 1:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, what a friendly thing to say. Emile.

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