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I Tried To Hide

I tried to hide I tried to hide But I just can't hide me I tried to hide Yet my soul speaks To me I tried to hide But all I see tells A tale I tried to hide Now can't hide from my self I tried to hide Yet nature keep me on To my dream I tried to hide Yet my mind can't Let me be I tried to hide But I can't hide The truth I tried to hide Yet I can not hide Now no wonder always I tried to hide For the more I tried to hide The hidden Keep me on So the unknown Reveal a revelation whenever I tried to hide

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Robert Lindley

Date: 4/9/2015 8:14:00 AM

Stop hiding and write more great poems! This is a solid gem, it is! I once hid to avoid the mess I made in my life. Then later I found out facing and solving the mess was what living is truly all about. We imperfect creatures can not help but to mess up. A7 and adding this great poem to my fav list! Thanks..

Eve Roper

Date: 1/16/2015 1:00:00 PM

Good write, Richard. Bless you eve

Richard Nnoli
Date: 2/1/2015 10:39:00 AM

OH MAY UR LIFE BE SO SO, MORE AND MORE FRUITFUL EVE, THANKS ALOT FOR UR WORDS OF BLESSING RICHARD