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I Thought You But

i thought you the freind who stand by my side i thought you the brother who can dry my tears i thought you the father who can watch over me i thought you the hero who can save me from my lonly nights i thought you the musicien who can play me with his guitar i thought you the poet who can writ me betweenn his words i thought you an angel who can muzmurize me with his shininh smile i thought you the prince who can hold me on his white horse i thought you the doctor who can heal my wounds i thought you the one...but you were just a magician who played me with his fingers a phantom who locked me in his tower you were a faretale, no but a nightmare you used my trust you took my soul you stool my smile you burned my wings you swallowed my dreams most of all you brock my heart

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/23/2023 3:35:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

Date: 5/4/2016 11:52:00 AM

Sarra Soualah Alila, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/5/2016 12:15:00 AM

Hi Sarra, giving this another read,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2015 9:07:00 AM

:) SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/27/2015 11:13:00 PM

Sarra, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 3/26/2015 1:17:00 PM

SARRA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"