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I Still Care About You

We were perfect for each other. You knew it as well as I did. We laughed and smiled together. We shared our deepest darkest secrets with one another You took me places no one else has ever been. Your family took care of my brother when he had nowhere to go. I loved you with all my heart. You said you did to. I didn't care about your past. I never cared about what my family thought of you. You act like I have never been part of your life. You say nasty hurtful words about me. Be a man and face me. Tell me why you hate me so much. Maybe then I could let you go. For now though I still care about you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/15/2010 8:41:00 AM
That's so sad and I feel your pain. I am going through this right now. Guy's always make it so hard to hate them too! Well anyway nice write and I understand how you must feel. Smile~Brittany
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:54:00 PM
wonderful writing. emotions make the best poem fodder. well done.lol.Tom
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Date: 11/17/2009 1:02:00 PM
it's funny how our hearts are always last to get the "it's over" memo. well done
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Date: 11/5/2009 11:15:00 AM
Wonderful writing Courtney it was a joy to read thank you. I wish you a fun filled inspiring day. Love, Carol
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