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I Slipped On a Tear

I slipped on a tear, now listen up, "dear" you better know why you're soon gonna die when I'm off this tush I'll give you a push a shove and a kick you picked the wrong chick You'll slip on YOUR tear and land on your rear, but big boys don't cry I see tears; oh, my my! My tear served an "end" But no other I'll spend Crying's not for me So just let me be!!! Or I'll get out the gun and hunt you down, "hon" No woman should be Unhappy like me Eileen Manassian June 22, 2015 For Cyndi's Rockwell's Contest

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Date: 7/24/2016 3:31:00 AM
Perfect meter..great write!
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Date: 7/3/2016 6:47:00 AM
Good luck well written x
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Date: 6/25/2016 10:10:00 AM
Dropping by with a hello and a hug.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/25/2016 10:19:00 AM
Always welcome, dear....Hugs, Richard.
Date: 6/24/2016 7:35:00 AM
I won't be messing with you *lol* good luck in the contest Eileen, hugs Rick.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/25/2016 10:19:00 AM
Yep...best not to! ;) Kidding....hugs
Date: 6/23/2016 2:31:00 PM
Eileen, Well penned. Enjoyed every line.A7..........//:) hugs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/25/2016 10:20:00 AM
Thank you, Manmath. I'm glad you enjoyed this silly little write.
Date: 6/22/2016 9:46:00 PM
awesome revenge type poem Eileen. It is fun to do this kind once in a while!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/25/2016 10:21:00 AM
:) There is no revenge category listed....imagine that! Thanks for the visit, dear.
Date: 6/22/2016 6:56:00 PM
So happy I am your friend dear, Eileen so never will I have to face your wrath! Haha! Excellent dear one! Good luck!
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Date: 6/22/2016 4:06:00 PM
Love this one dear Eileen...I could feel the roar if someone dares to make you shed tears. BTW...I am following all your youtube posts..Loved the last one for your sweet daughter..Awesome.
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Date: 6/22/2016 12:55:00 PM
I really liked the spunk in this. Don't mess with you!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/22/2016 3:46:00 PM
;) Awwww....I'm a softie, but don't get on my bad side! Hugs

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