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I shall betray you

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© 04-05-2013, G. V., All Rights Reserved(Iambic tetrameter)

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I shall betray you

I shall betray you, you just said,
cause life is a lone roses' bed,
thread twined and weaved on canvas grid.

The leaves turn yellow you just said,
because the garlands only fade,
adornment hung - on lonely door.
With eminent the lights outside,
impertinent the thorns inside,
the mistle droplets shine on road.

In air descends guarded her veil
I splendid emptiness inhale,
marquee of stars is my abode.

The cadence of my heart's her grace
aloneness that discerns and prays,
- her eyes that stare to nightly fields.

The rain adjoins whom she embraced
when wet my finger tips outraced
her tears and face - caressed eye lids.
Arrows of thoughts, that guide my quill
destined to leave, are scared and still,
celestial hue and coastal shore.

Without your voice, my quest and role,
a glassy dome, my soul's extol,
in dark I see your glance's mead.

© 04-05-2013, All rights reserved

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  1. Date: 1/29/2014 4:26:00 AM
    Beautiful expression in your lines, no one portrays emotions which such depth and such intensity! and I can never be as talented as you are. Congrats on your 1st place win in this contest!

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 8:26:00 PM
    Enjoyed your first write and congrats on the first win, Giorgio

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 8:00:00 PM
    Beautiful poem penned G, congrats on your winning 1stPlace, your a first rate writer, xxx

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 6:20:00 PM
    - Nice to read your first poem,Giorgio ! - Also enjoyable that you got the first place in the contest - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 5:36:00 PM
    This is deep, Giorgio. I love every verse. Favs. Congrats and poetic embraces!

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 5:02:00 PM
    I note the old pen was as good as the new. As always your rhymes impress. Congrats on your win. Ron

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 4:59:00 PM
    well giorgio, it doesn't surprise me to find this poem is yours! from the first time I read it I had it marked as a probable 1st place...I'm a sucker for romance,and this was certainly romantic, and very beautiful, though bittersweet...out of the poems of yours that I've read so far I think this is my favourite, because I like the more personal touch in it - congrats on your win! :)

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 1:57:00 PM
    first poem,,,, very nice as always ;}

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 4:13:00 PM
    I just came to read your first poem here and its wonderfully penned.You stir so much emotions through these worfs..Magnifique : )

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 5:22:00 PM
    I came to see your very first post and it was this one I already saw. Now I understand . It probably was not your very first entry in a contest but was the first version of your redo!! I see you have not been here long and yet you have put up many poems. Way to go!

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 8:07:00 PM
    Giorgio , Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) it has been an honor spotting your poem on the soups home page. Take care, and have yourself a lovely- GOODNIGHT **LINDA**

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 5:27:00 PM
    Giorgio :-), Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 10:03:00 PM
    Hi; i came to read your first poem. It is very well written. I enjoyed reading it very much. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you enjoy being here.........Lucilla