I See You

I see you Do you see me peeking at you From behind the rose bush? Look at your lovely hair - a tousled mess Those eyes, gleaming in the afternoon sunlight I pull on your apron strings Perchance a small smile Oh no! Not a frown from you I see you Did you know that I was watching you When you were busy making chocolate cake? Just look at your sweet face Flour on your nose and cheek I squeeze your arm tightly Mayhaps I get the spoon Thank you for keeping me close I see you You don't know that I am looking at you Wrapped up in your blanket So cozy and warm - a quiet nod A peaceful time for you Can hardly wait for you to waken I'll find a hiding place So I can watch again

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Jerrell Jones

Date: 11/1/2015 7:51:00 AM

beautiful

Neva Romaine
Date: 11/3/2015 1:37:00 PM

Hey Jerrell, such a lovely and gracious comment from you. Thank you so much. It means a lot to me. Be Blessed, Neva

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 10/27/2015 11:54:00 AM

Wonderful write Neva.. :) loved it

Neva Romaine
Date: 10/27/2015 3:50:00 PM

Hey Remnants, thank you so much for your gracious comments. I do love your visits. Be Blessed, Neva

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/5/2015 4:06:00 AM

Excellent pen Neva! A 7! Sweet piece!:)Thank you so much for visiting my page and for your kind feedback , very much appreciate it all my friend. Wishing you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you!:) D.

Neva Romaine
Date: 9/8/2015 3:10:00 PM

Hey Dorian, I'm so glad you found a moment to visit with me and for your gracious comments on my poem. I do appreciate it so much and I look forward to visiting more of your poems too. Be Blessed, Neva

Asma Memon

Date: 4/6/2015 3:36:00 PM

Nice

Neva Romaine
Date: 4/7/2015 9:56:00 AM

Hey Asma, thank you for finding a moment to visit and for your sweet comment on my poem. Be Blessed, Neva

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2015 9:43:00 PM

Neva,, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/22/2015 10:41:00 PM

NEVA, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3

Neva Romaine
Date: 3/23/2015 8:22:00 AM

Sweet Linda, thank you so very much for choosing my poem I See You as one of the winners of your wonderful contest. WOW!! This was so unexpected. Thank you Linda for acknowledging me and thinking so highly of my poem. I can't express how much it means to me. I will visit your blog "POETS". Be Blessed, Neva

Sandip Goswami

Date: 3/21/2015 3:44:00 PM

Very nice dear. Similarly I see you in your poems. Here you are smiling, thinking, enjoying, protesting, loving, caring, frustrating....Finally I have realized your poetic mind. Best wishes from India. Long live with love and respect. Well wisher

Neva Romaine
Date: 3/23/2015 8:15:00 AM

Dear Sandip, thank you so much for finding a moment to visit me and for your most encouraging and inspiring comments on my poem I See You. I do appreciate your well wishes from beautiful India. Thanks again and Be Blessed, Neva

Millicent Mashatola

Date: 3/18/2015 7:17:00 AM

Nice, lovely piece...I love it. hugs:-) Milly

Neva Romaine
Date: 3/19/2015 9:19:00 AM

Hey Milly, thank you for finding a moment to visit and for your very sweet comments on my poem I See You. I do appreciate it very much. Be Blessed, Neva

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 3/14/2015 11:19:00 AM

A very lovely and adoring write. My guy watches me the same way, made me smile reading this. Hugs

Neva Romaine
Date: 3/17/2015 3:17:00 PM

Thank you so much Cecilia for visiting again and for your very lovely comments on my poem I See You. There is nothing like those you love watching and enjoying your presence. Thanks for sharing that with me. Be Blessed, Neva

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/13/2015 9:38:00 PM

Wow, great! Def a 7!

Neva Romaine
Date: 3/17/2015 3:14:00 PM

Hey Njeri, how nice of you to visit and I do appreciate your very nice comment on my poem I See You. Be Blessed, Neva

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/12/2015 6:33:00 PM

The poem uses unusual and imaginative subject matter to make a statement and is clever in its use. This is excellent in form, delivery and content. Emile.

Neva Romaine
Date: 3/13/2015 8:26:00 AM

Hey Emile, thank you for finding a moment to visit me. I do so appreciate your amazingly profound, insightful and encouraging comments on my poem I See You. I look forward to visiting you also and enjoying your wonderful poems. Thank you again Emile. Be Blessed, Neva

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2015 9:30:00 AM

Interesting work..Welcome to soup..Sara

Neva Romaine
Date: 3/10/2015 10:07:00 AM

Hey Sara, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem I See You. Been here with Poetry Soup for years and I enjoy it so much. Be Blessed, Neva

Matt Forshay

Date: 3/8/2015 1:52:00 PM

This is a very touching poem. You never know who is watching you with those loving eyes. It may be your spouse, your child, or an admirer.

Neva Romaine
Date: 3/9/2015 11:03:00 AM

Dearest Matt, thank you for finding a moment to visit me and for your sweet and insightful comments on my poem I See You. It means a lot to me and I look forward to visiting and enjoying your poems. Be Blessed, Neva

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 3/7/2015 3:19:00 AM

Your Poem touches the heart that too with a warmth and sweet smile and leaves the reader to read it again and again. Outstandingly beautiful piece of work dear friend. Thank you for your kind and precious comments on my Prose Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor

Neva Romaine
Date: 3/9/2015 10:59:00 AM

Ravindra, what a lovely and encouraging comment from you on my poem I See You. It is so kind of you to find a moment to visit and share what's in your heart with me. Thank you so much and I look forward to visiting you too!! Be Blessed, Neva

Abdelwaheb Dhaou

Date: 3/6/2015 10:20:00 AM

Awesome piece Neva ! I really elated ! Please keep up you really illuminated my day !

Neva Romaine
Date: 3/9/2015 10:56:00 AM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment Abdelwaheb. I do appreciate your visit to my poem I See You. Be Blessed, Neva

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/3/2015 12:30:00 AM

what a loving experience to be watch over and the awareness that someone is looking \after you.. not stalker but simply because of loving.. :)! I love it.. :)! //olive eloisa

Neva Romaine
Date: 3/3/2015 10:09:00 AM

Olive, thank you so much sweetheart for your visit and the sweet and insightful comments on my poem I See You. I do appreciate it so much. Be Blessed, Neva

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/28/2015 8:15:00 PM

Your poem is perfect Neva, once of the best poems I've read today. A nice way sharing and keeping that warm love close. I feel nothing but love and security here.. Amazing poem .LINDA

Neva Romaine
Date: 3/2/2015 3:22:00 PM

Linda, thank you for visiting me and for your most sincere, encouraging and inspiring comments on my poem I See You. I do treasure your opinion so much and feel honored that you think so highly of this poem. Thanks again Linda and Be Blessed always. Neva

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2015 11:19:00 PM

I keep coming back to this one now. It is so delightful.

Neva Romaine
Date: 2/27/2015 10:28:00 AM

Dearest Andrea, I truly appreciate you for the moments you find to visit me and for your double endearing comments. I am truly honored. Thank you so much. Be Blessed, Neva

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/24/2015 6:38:00 PM

Dear Neva, What a refreshing work, it's so sweetly written and expressed I feel as though you capture a piece of photograph of an afternoon with me and one of my grandgirls playing, thanks for the special sharing of this poem, cheri

Neva Romaine
Date: 2/26/2015 1:49:00 PM

Thank you so much Cheri. I truly appreciate your encouraging and sincere comments on my poem I See You. You have such amazing insight and I am honored that you have found more moments to visit with me. Be Blessed, Neva

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/24/2015 4:43:00 AM

What a lovely poem...the love is palpable. Thanks for sharing this sweet write.

Neva Romaine
Date: 2/24/2015 3:23:00 PM

Eileen, thank you so much for your visit and for a very sweet and thoughtful comment on my poem I See You. Be Blessed, Neva

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2015 12:14:00 AM

Simple romance is the best. A very enjoyable poem to read.

Neva Romaine
Date: 2/24/2015 3:21:00 PM

Hey Andrea, thanks so much for visiting me and I do appreciate your nice comment on my poem I See You. Be Blessed, Neva

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/22/2015 6:43:00 AM

A wonderful sentiment expressed in a marvelous way! A joy inspiring write my friend, wish I that could give it a super ten but A7 is tops from me. Bravoooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Neva Romaine
Date: 2/23/2015 9:49:00 AM

Dearest Richard, thank you so much for such a beautiful and encouraging comment on my poem I See You. You have most certainly lifted my spirit and I do appreciate you find a moment to visit me. Thank you again Richard, so much. Be Blessed, Neva

Paul Callus

Date: 2/20/2015 3:37:00 PM

Oh this is so lovely....magnetic attraction between mother and child...innocent voyeurism. I really like it. // paul

Neva Romaine
Date: 2/23/2015 9:25:00 AM

Thank you Paul for your visit and your lovely comment on my poem I See You. I truly appreciate your insight and kind words. Be Blessed, Neva

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/20/2015 10:09:00 AM

Disarmingly charming write you have here, Neva. I like its simplicity and innocent approach to address the beloved in her routine and even in slumber. Seven! Smiles from the thousand isles. :D

Neva Romaine
Date: 2/20/2015 10:49:00 AM

Hey there Kim, thank you so much for finding a moment to visit me and for your lovely and sincere comments on my poem I See You. Your insight is truly appreciated. Be Blessed, Neva

Jenny Jae

Date: 2/20/2015 9:04:00 AM

" Just look at your sweet face Flour on your nose and cheek " That brought smile ! Good One Neva :) Your comments are very encouraging too. Have a beautiful weekend :)

Neva Romaine
Date: 2/20/2015 10:43:00 AM

Thank you Jenny on your welcome visit. I am so glad you enjoyed my poem I See You and I do appreciate your warm comments too. Be Blessed. Neva