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I Save You Day

I save you day from the night I save you from the shadows I save you from the nightmares I save you by taking my time Even time takes time As the light needs the sun I beg the clouds to stop for a while And stare at me And start to figure out What shape I will turn in to While I am running beneath Just like I do when I look at them When they float above me Up in the sky Even time takes time As the mother needs the son I beg the flowers To embrace me and breathe me in And I want them to wonder Where this sweet sense of smell was made In what kind of heaven The first, fourth or seventh Just like I do to them When I smell their fields of paradise Even time takes time Just like the day needs the night I save you day from the night I save you from the shadows I save you from the nightmares I save you by taking my time Here, in these moments, in these seconds I save you day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/28/2015 1:13:00 AM
I save you day from the night I save you from the shadows I save you from the nightmares I save you by taking my time Good pictures above i like the poem Congs
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Emmanuel Brian Oule
Date: 3/2/2015 3:47:00 AM
i flag you thanks Poet Mona
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Mona Karaki
Date: 2/28/2015 6:18:00 AM
Thank you a lot!!
Date: 2/27/2015 10:29:00 PM
Hi Mona, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~
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Mona Karaki
Date: 2/28/2015 6:18:00 AM
Thank you dear skat
Date: 2/24/2015 5:37:00 PM
Loved this poem Mona! Beautifully crafted. Congrats
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Mona Karaki
Date: 2/24/2015 7:02:00 PM
Thank you mark!! ??
Date: 2/24/2015 7:15:00 AM
I felt warm and comfortable with this poem VB Rogers. Keep up the craft.
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Mona Karaki
Date: 2/24/2015 4:43:00 PM
I felt the same when i wrote it and i am glad i could spread these beautiful feelings and share them with you . Thank you valerie!
Date: 2/23/2015 7:53:00 PM
Very creative verse. Congrad's Light & Love
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Mona Karaki
Date: 2/24/2015 6:38:00 AM
Thank you debbie, much light and love you back!!
Date: 2/22/2015 9:23:00 PM
Beautiful write, Mona, congratulations on your win. Blessings
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Mona Karaki
Date: 2/23/2015 4:29:00 AM
Thanks a lot eve i am really glad and happy!! Thanks a lot
Date: 2/22/2015 6:08:00 PM
Mona, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Mona Karaki
Date: 2/22/2015 7:24:00 PM
I mean did i win the contest ????!
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Mona Karaki
Date: 2/22/2015 7:18:00 PM
What did i win???
Date: 2/22/2015 5:16:00 PM
Mona, This is an intriguing take on the theme. The repetition of the line "even time takes time" followed by he simple examples created a gentle mood of expectation. Thank you for being a part of the contest - for without the writers of the poems......
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Mona Karaki
Date: 2/22/2015 7:24:00 PM
Dear john i appreceate that you liked my poem and i am very happy. People are sending me congratulations to my win was it your competition? I really dont know!!
Date: 2/12/2015 8:07:00 PM
Very beautiful poem!!
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Mona Karaki
Date: 2/13/2015 7:38:00 AM
Thank you!! :)
Date: 2/11/2015 6:36:00 PM
I ADMIRE your classy style magic under the rainbow well written Mona.
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Mona Karaki
Date: 2/24/2015 6:40:00 AM
Thank you valerie i read your magic under the rainbow and loved it too!!

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