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I Remember

I remember the first day I saw her; her lips glittering in the summer sun, and smile as beautiful as a shooting star She looked like a mermaid that was pretending to be a human I still remember.......

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Date: 3/26/2013 9:05:00 PM
Dear Teddy, Congratulations on YOUR Winning POEM " I Remember " in the Contest "One of YOUR Greatest days" Sponsored by Dan Kearley. Beautiful Living Memory.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/27/2013 8:29:00 AM
Thanks Harry! I really appreciate it! ;)
Date: 3/19/2013 10:27:00 PM
Hi Teddy, your poem is just beautiful, what a lovely way and day! Congratulations with your amazing poem, always~ LINDA
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/20/2013 7:22:00 AM
Thanks Linda! ;)

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