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I Remain

I remain… I remain… What is this cane? What is this pain? I remain. Within my house, mirrors complain; I remain. My spring gone by, summer was dry, and now what? The winter cold, my life disdain, I remain. The sounds are dim, the sight is gone, the grey hair. Nothing feels right; crying like rain, I remain. My nights veil fear; the end is near, so is death. Within each step, a major strain I remain. What is this life? Suddenly changed, mere lies. The things I loved never sustain, I remain. My youth is gone; the thing is left is called pain. The life of pain is so mundane, I remain. Nothing seems real, bitterness reveals, and so What else can do? If you explain! I remain. Tell me “Haloo” from this life, what should I seek? It’s only love that will remain; I remain. 3/13/2016 Haloo Give me a Ghazal poetry contest

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Date: 6/27/2016 1:49:00 PM
thts all true agiain there reamians no pain,just love it flows and makes the world a better place to breathe ' if it vanishes then truely nothing will remain loved reading your work
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/13/2016 12:24:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 3/29/2016 5:07:00 PM
Hi Pashang, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/30/2016 10:31:00 PM
Thank you very much Vlad.
Date: 3/27/2016 2:02:00 PM
Many congrats Pashang:-) hugs Jan xx
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/30/2016 10:30:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan
Date: 3/27/2016 9:41:00 AM
Pashang, congratulations on your win. Linda
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/30/2016 10:30:00 PM
Thank you very much Linda, you're always kind.
Date: 3/27/2016 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations on placing in this contest, Pashang. Nice going.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/30/2016 10:29:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 3/27/2016 8:23:00 AM
Pashang, your Ghazal is sad and lovely. One day your happy and full of life and the next the mirror magically makes you old.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/30/2016 10:28:00 PM
You're so kind, thank you very much...
Date: 3/27/2016 4:56:00 AM
Reality of life expressed with perfect rythm...meaningfuuul...Congratulations
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/30/2016 10:27:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 3/27/2016 1:58:00 AM
Very well done congrats on your placement!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/30/2016 10:27:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 3/26/2016 11:49:00 PM
Congrats Pashang! Your soul is very melancholic, and it shows through your writing. Getting older, doubts linger ... and you wrote it with practically perfect flow. "In this house, mirrors complain" ... this line was simultaneously humorous as well as sad ... sounds much like Life.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/30/2016 1:47:00 PM
Thanks Tim
Date: 3/22/2016 11:05:00 AM
Great ghazal here:}
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/22/2016 2:27:00 PM
Thank you Jo
Date: 3/20/2016 2:09:00 PM
This is amazingly good work. YOU are a ghazaleer!!! Par excellence. I had to step away from my computer and I think it was the spring poem i meant to see . Let me go now and read it.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/20/2016 3:33:00 PM
No dear, ghazaleer is you for ever and ever! thank you..
Date: 3/19/2016 12:15:00 PM
Great write Pashang...thanks for stopping by...much appreciated
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/19/2016 12:54:00 PM
Thank you... you're always welcome.
Date: 3/19/2016 9:08:00 AM
Dear Salehi Another sad poem written with excellence, well done you've earned another seven my friend, cheri done
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/19/2016 12:53:00 PM
Thank you Cherl, did you know that if you turn the number "7", 120 degrees clock wise, it turns to almost a "V" if you turn to 180 degrees clock wise it becomes "L", if you go 270 degrees it turns to " ?" which is an IPA vowel for a half way between an open and closed tongue !!! cheers
Date: 3/16/2016 7:57:00 PM
As life changes there are not many things that remain the same but love can...excellent Pashang
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/18/2016 11:19:00 AM
Thanks Tim.... You said it. Praise the love far and wide....from seekers it face do not hide.... Pashang
Date: 3/16/2016 6:31:00 PM
Yes my friend only the love remains. Absolutely beautiful. Your pen is feeling better. Hugs for the missus. Peace my friend:)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/18/2016 11:17:00 AM
Thanks DT, I unblocked myself so I can thank you. It took me a couple of days. Silent one helped me... Only you know about love and gentleness. Thank you

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