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I Promise!

I promise to be here forever and always To love and to worship To give affection and fate And to build our strong friendship. I promise to be understanding when we come to a disagreement To be sincere and to purpose a herd of encouragement. I promise not to hurt you and be with you consistently Because you are my dream come true you are my fantasy. I promise you my love for now and forever more, you are my one and only The one that I adore. I promise you my everything I will be here for eternity You mean the whole wide world to me, You are my ecstasy!? -Amber Dawn Anderson

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Date: 2/7/2016 10:26:00 PM
AMBER, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/28/2009 10:14:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Amber. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/20/2009 9:27:00 AM
Nice to see one more Canadian who likes to be poetic! Not a bad poem at all, a little too much chaotic for my taste. I wrote a similar poem but with much more flow, I think you would like to read it.
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Date: 12/17/2009 2:53:00 PM
beautiful words written in pen i enjoyd it!!
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Date: 12/17/2009 9:36:00 AM
Your words are so sincere they make me believe. Welcome to poetry soup, and promise too to write more. I wait to read you again.
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