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I Once Lived

I Once Lived I once lived in darkest shade of deep pain Breaking hard stones racing against the grain Savage echoes, I then happily stored To be released later when I was bored Method to my madness, I needed not I lived to give back, as good as I got. No worries about any future cost I reveled in this darkened path so lost. Nobody said, I don't give a damn, more Few worried less about the final score Then time finally brought me up to speed About life, love and searching soul's true need Now heart demands I give up bad desires Stay true and squash those hot burning fires Robert J. Lindley, 12-30-2016 Sonnet Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Words: 108

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Date: 1/6/2017 3:03:00 AM
“Worry often gives a small thing a big shadow.”... Happy new year
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Date: 12/30/2016 9:46:00 AM
Nice sonnet, Robert, we always make the right decisions at the end my hands are always extended for God's presence Hugs Eve
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Robert Lindley
Date: 12/30/2016 10:05:00 AM
True, we do if we find the Light, walk the Path and love the Lord. We are still tempted, perhaps even more so, but knowing what and who tempts us its easy to refuse such.. Love God and love family-- do both, one is invincible if maintained ..Tyr
Date: 12/30/2016 9:02:00 AM
Love the sonnet, Robert. What fun would life be without a few bad desires:)
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Date: 12/30/2016 9:07:00 AM
You have a point but some desires a man's wife frowns upon! And no way will I ever be unfaithful to my beautiful and sweet wife, mother of our son... Nothing in this world is ever worth that to me... As a young man,I made many mistakes.. Wisdom comes from learning from such.. Thanks for commenting and keep writing your awesome poetry my friend!

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