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I Notice

I see something in you
a few scars do show
but baby 
you made it through all that 
you brought your heart right back
and placed it in my lap 
for me to have
beating just for me
looking up into your eyes
i see you gave me all
of you 
No walls to hide a single thing
hearing those words 
means everything to me
i love you 
Cause baby, I hold your heart
you gave it to me
Holding you close to show you 
I am yours
And i want to keep you safe 
from the cold cold world
Kissing your lips like i have found the one
feeling an unimaginable feeling of bliss 
can't describe, but i can feel
that feeling
you give to me.
And in your hands 
you hold my heart.

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