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I Need a Saviour

No matter what I do...it's never enough. Living in this world...is getting so tough. Just when I think, to myself, I'm ok, I realize...I need you...to save the day. What I do, without you, it's not the same, Rely on myself, it's not good, no one to blame. This world is hard, not much love to share, Without your love, I would be nowhere. I...need you...to...make it through, each day. I'm getting stronger, for your help I pray. I realize...that I'm so weak, I need a favour. I know you're there for me, I need a saviour. We all need to feel loved, to help us through, we all make mistakes, we're not perfect that is true. There is a hope, for all those, who love. He died for me and you, sent from God above. John Derek Hamilton Feb23,2013 revised October 15,2015

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Date: 5/2/2016 2:00:00 PM
Great piece and message John, indeed we all need the living saviour!
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John Hamilton
Date: 5/2/2016 8:25:00 PM
Thanks Gordon for your visit and comment!

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