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I Must Tell You This

I must tell you this Valentine’s Day-our first That you satisfy a longing thirst With a love that is deeper, yet Than any in the past has dealt My spirit you light up with joy Without you I sometimes feel lost Now I look forward to a new day My love I freely bring your way Our vows, no secrets, no lies, we talk Accepting each others’ flaws Though bodies never yet entwine Imaginings fly beyond the moon divine Through verse and pen we explore God’s blessings, our minds and hearts do implore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/23/2010 9:14:00 AM
Hi, I enjoyed reading this amazing poem about lovers. Keep writing! ~ D. Smith
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Date: 2/14/2010 9:02:00 PM
Audrey your welcome to contact me on my other poetry site all one word poetry poem . com /poet 3 2 3 8 This is another beautiful poem. thank you for sharing it with all of us here in poetry soup. have a wonderful evening, Dean
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Date: 2/13/2010 2:37:00 PM
what a good relationship! Light & Love
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Date: 2/12/2010 9:36:00 PM
nice job on the reality of loving which is accepting the flaws and all. Nice Audrey. Robert
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Date: 2/12/2010 5:21:00 PM
'Accepting each others' flaws' is my favorite line in this one, Audrey...beautifully done! - Tim
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Date: 2/12/2010 4:40:00 PM
It sounds like a long distance relationship? I know many of those that have ended very well. REally nice, Audrey, and I love your title. Andrea
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Date: 2/12/2010 4:04:00 PM
Beautiful poem from a very special person to another...Romantic..Wish you all the happiness in the world:)Charma
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Date: 2/12/2010 1:32:00 PM
romantic poem, enjoyed
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Date: 2/12/2010 1:16:00 PM
Beautifully written sonnet. Congratulations on finding that someone special.
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Date: 2/12/2010 10:27:00 AM
Lovely write Audrey...full of feeling..TAH
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