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I Missed You

my saturday is gone my saturday was a bore it feels like i am hanging on something that i tore maybe it was my heart maybe it was someone my mind is failing me it feels like i am done i sit on the couch i changed every television channels and i am wondering alone my mind is freezing on a wondering panel like a cage or a prison being held for what it is done what was done was that i lost you and this is what i had become it is not sorrow it is neither my emptiness for it was not empty it was filled and always be. but why do i feel this way? why do i feel a sense of astray? why do i feel lost and disarray? i am sitting on a couch but also passing my day so the song sings in my head and i cannot leave without a doubt that i missed you within me and i missed you with all my remaining pieces of my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/22/2009 1:49:00 AM
heart breaking, Eric!! gosh... i feel so sorry!! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/21/2009 11:11:00 AM
Eric, torn hearts and failing minds are powerful images. Go outside and listen to the song birds. God's creatures provide such wonderful inspiration. I am just getting to know you through your wonderful poetry, and I must say I like what I am reading. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/21/2009 9:41:00 AM
This is a very touching piece of art..I can feel the longing and the pain in the piece.. you wrote the piece well by giving us indications of how much the heart is aching..well done.
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