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I Miss You Granny

The distant night stars Spread out like the fireflies Granny watches me.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2013 6:59:00 AM

Great work..I can see the scene of a lonely girl looking up at the stars..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, on some poems when I go back I remember the emotion, the scene, or deep inner goings on when I wrote them..Sara

Watisungla Ao
Date: 4/27/2013 8:41:00 AM

Thank you Sara for reading my poem..much love,Watisungla :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2013 5:59:00 PM

this is just wonderful!!

Watisungla Ao
Date: 4/27/2013 4:56:00 AM

Thank you Andrea for reading my poem...with warm regards,Watisungla :)

Richard Palmer

Date: 11/16/2012 4:39:00 AM

looking down,looking out for her sweet grand daughter,granny has become your angel,wonderful write Watisungla

Watisungla Ao
Date: 11/16/2012 4:41:00 AM

Thanks Richard for reading my poem...with warm regards,Watisungla :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2012 2:35:00 AM

Yes, she do....always, Watisungla. - Very well written haiku - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Watisungla Ao
Date: 11/16/2012 4:39:00 AM

Thanks Anne for reading my poem...with warm regards,Watisungla :)