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I Mended Him


These whole times 
I've spent my life assembling fractured pieces
Gluing them with my tears
And mending them in my caress

For a man that used to be fragile and scared
I’ve brought him life and honest deed
Now he’s strong like he’s never been scattered
He forgot who he was and leaves me strayed

I can still hear his fears and weep
What a heart he has
After he’s fixed
He discards me ripped

I mended him 

With tears I glue my fractions and will win

Dinda Minardi
For 'Picking Up the Broken Pieces' by Gail 
Angel Doyle

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  1. Date: 3/16/2013 11:34:00 AM
    Well deserved praise for your winning entry. Beyond that I send true appreciation for masterful talent.... You are terrific!.... Jake

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 1:14:00 AM
    Wonderfully written Dinda! I love the build up to the story and the optimistic resolution at the end. Nice!

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 7:11:00 AM
    I love this poem, I am afraid to cry for fear my eyes will be glued shut and I won't be able to read your next poem. Great job

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 9:38:00 AM
    A wonderful and profound poem,Dinda! A strong and powerful ending too.A belate congrats on your win!! Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 10:22:00 AM
    very profound poem, love hoiw you ended this wonderful poem....

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 11:36:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning poem in "Picking Up The Broken Pieces" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 2:29:00 AM
    Congratulations. Seren

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 11:19:00 PM

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:50:00 PM
    Dinda, Congratulations on your win,,, always~pd

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:24:00 PM
    That is a sad tale. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 4:50:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Broken Pieces" contest Dinda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 11:57:00 PM
    deeply scribed and a wonder of a piece, dinda... much pleased!..) huggs

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 1:57:00 PM
    A touching poem from you Dinda.Very Emotional write.Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 11:18:00 AM
    A very expressive piece written with a lot of emotion! Best of luck in the contest :)