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I Melt Away

cast upon my heart your name and face imprinted cast upon my lips your kisses, sweet and sultry I melt away into you

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Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/3/2010 10:14:00 PM

Wilma this is just breathtaking Tanka ... beautifully penned and executed ... brava ... love Jayne

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/2/2010 12:10:00 AM

love this Wilma, such honesty and truth. you are one very sincere lady. Harry

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/1/2010 3:12:00 PM

Hey Wilma, so well penned! I belive James! We now got the "crispy Scottish air" here by now! But this piece warms one up! Ek hoop dat jy met 'n groot en ontspanning Sondag ... Gert:!)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2010 12:16:00 PM

I stopped back Wilma to thank you for your always kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/30/2010 6:40:00 PM

ok, wilma, now ask me again why you thought I was asking you if you were in love?? This is excellent!

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/30/2010 4:50:00 PM

Very passionate, Wilma! Has a wonderful flow to it as well. Best to you, Diane

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 9/30/2010 3:44:00 PM

I want you already. juicy poem girlfriend.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/30/2010 2:10:00 PM

Got me warm with this one!!! luv Michael

James Fraser

Date: 9/30/2010 2:09:00 PM

I need the Scottish air to cool me down now, it's so loving Wilma >> James :)

Daver Austin

Date: 9/30/2010 11:30:00 AM

This is HOT, Wilma. good use of Tanka. Dave

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2010 11:29:00 AM

What an outstanding way to enjoy a day. I am so happy to be able to read the excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup today. Hope you are enjoying your day and finding much inspiration along the way Wilma. Love, Carol

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 9/30/2010 10:39:00 AM

wooooow, that is nice! I like it! and by the way, I haven't been @ the soup in months only to post and jump back off the computer, I very much appreciated your comment while ago, I used to read your work regularly, whether I left comment or not, take good care, blessings, Cindy

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/30/2010 10:15:00 AM

Sounds very romantic, Wilma, being able to "melt away into" someone who has captured your heart. Such a beautiful tanka, dear! Thanks for your good wishes on my journey. I'll be leaving tomorrow morning. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/30/2010 5:47:00 AM

Very passionate and sentimental-romantic write you have penned well, Wilma - Nice melting of the hearts

Paula Lelitte

Date: 9/30/2010 4:18:00 AM

this is delightful and so eloquently done..