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I Love You No More

I have so much anticipation Love always in supplication Over a cup of tea to think it over and over again Vend this yearning that abuse my mind Exhausted with your banter acts You confused me with your synthetic laughs Owed me with so much love Unaware of your context move Now I’m awake with this contusion Out of the blue, it’s come a new you Mine you if I tell you I’m not in love with you Oh! Could I say it loud? Right, I heard you say why? End is now my dear lover. (Acrostic form) Lie 17/9/08

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/10/2014 8:01:00 AM

Hi Lena, great write - we have to know when someone is not the one and when to move on! Thank you for sharing this gem!

Lena Emp
Date: 7/23/2017 2:39:00 PM

Thank you so much, yes we need to accept the fact that one is not moving right you need to let go, so you will grow

Diane Christian

Date: 5/30/2014 3:23:00 PM

well expressed the end of a love thanks for your kind words on my poems

Lena Emp
Date: 5/31/2014 12:55:00 AM

Thanks Diane thanks for this warmth comment too.

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/28/2014 1:19:00 AM

The last line is so sadly definitive. "Now I awake with this contusion..." very meaningful, and original. Abuse of the mind as you say, fascinating Lena. Tough poetry. J.A.B.

Lena Emp
Date: 5/29/2014 2:21:00 AM

Thanks I love to write a poem base on what I feel at the moment and express it thoroughly through words. Thanks for this wonderful comment Justin.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2014 10:57:00 PM

good one done in acrostic form!! I enjoyed the read.

Lena Emp
Date: 5/26/2014 6:38:00 AM

Thanks Andrea for your kind comment.

Donna Jones

Date: 11/3/2013 6:08:00 PM

Another wonderful poem...confused me with your synthetic laughs..many people do this....I'm finding out....so sad people do this to each other...

Lena Emp
Date: 5/26/2014 6:36:00 AM

we cannot avoid it Donna... there are few people who are not so real. Thanks for this warmth comment.