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I Love You Bird- Waiting Contest

I Love You Bird Becca's Inspiration Waiting Contest Sponsor: craig cornish As I sit delaying any action until something else happens, I am reminded of that day you left.. I said good bye and didn't know it was for good, if only I could've had more insight. There I was dropping you off at your destination...me kissing you goodbye, you telling me... “I love you bird”. You were the only one who called your baby sister bird. I drove away. Too far to keep good watch of you, too close to not feel you closing your eyes. Such tired eyes you had. Exhausted and defeated from everything this world couldn't offer you, sweetheart. I sat by the phone~minutes~turning into~hours and when days had passed, I was still.....waiting....for your phone call. Surely, you would have called me if you were in trouble, surely I'd be right by your side. I swear, I sat in that exact chair every night for three months just..waiting for your phone call. Waiting is a funny thing, you see, seems so slow as each minute passes, and oh my, how long three months really is. March 17, 2011 I finally got the phone call. They had found you broken and torn and your eyes had been closed for awhile.Stuck in the snow so cold and alone.. My waiting was finally over..I had the answers I needed as soon as I read your letter. Nightly, as I sleep with your bear, I wait all night long to hear you whisper in my dreams... “I love you bird.” Date Written: January 26, 2016

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Date: 1/30/2016 4:05:00 PM
Oh LuLoo I was in tears by the end of your poem - I can't begin to imagine how traumatic this event was in your life - I hope one day in your dreams you hear the words you long for:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/30/2016 5:14:00 PM
It is cathartic for us to write Luloo - these words are simply meant to be written as they come straight from your heart - many of us write of our sad times it is what gets us through difficult times in our lives:-) hugs hugs Jan xxxx
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/30/2016 4:34:00 PM
I'm sorry if I got you upset, when I wrote this I was having a "Karen Night" if you know what I mean. And I know you know what I mean unfortunately. After I posted it, the next day I saw it placed and I read it and thought, how could this place because its too sad? I didn't realize at first how depressing it was until after...But yes, I go to bed every night praying she will visit me in my dreams. -luloo
Date: 1/29/2016 5:48:00 AM
Excellent write on the theme...... congrats on your win.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/29/2016 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Archana :) *Smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/29/2016 2:28:00 AM
Lovely poem..another superb win Laura ... big congrats!
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/29/2016 3:40:00 PM
Many thanks Dr. Upma :) I appreciate all your kind words *smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/28/2016 11:13:00 PM
you break my heart with this beautiful rendition.. well done and congrats on your win, dear lou!..huggs
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/29/2016 3:39:00 PM
Thank you, and as you can probably tell, I was have a "I miss my sister" night! lol -luloo
Date: 1/28/2016 7:49:00 PM
Well written Becca, this one had me blinking back those "I've got something in my eye" tears .....
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/29/2016 3:38:00 PM
Thank you John...-luloo
Date: 1/28/2016 6:53:00 PM
incredibly moving Laura…truly written from the soul
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/28/2016 7:29:00 PM
thank you David :)
Date: 1/27/2016 8:36:00 PM
oh my so heartbreaking, and so well written too, dear.
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Date: 1/27/2016 10:25:00 AM
Such a touching write, Laura. It s so full of sorrow and helplessness.
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Date: 1/27/2016 9:21:00 AM
oh...that's sad, why am i coming by poems like this today? my heart's breaking, i wish you well Laura, heartfelt write
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/27/2016 10:04:00 AM
White Sage... Yes this is very sad but as soon as craig posted the contest its the first thing I thought of. I'm sure it won't place well but it doesn't matter. All that matters is I was able to express myself during a sad moment in my head...
Date: 1/27/2016 12:03:00 AM
There is so much love in this poem and so much sadness. I can understand your pain. I just buried the last of my six siblings. Love, Joyce
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/27/2016 7:49:00 AM
oh no Joyce, I am sorry you have to go through that. I can't imagine losing all my siblings..Be blessed-luloo Take care Joyce

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