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I Love You

From the moment I saw you And your big eyes blue I loved you From the moment you cried And scrunched up your eyes I loved you From the moment you curled your fingers And in my hand it did linger I loved you From the moment a step was taken And you fell, unshaken I loved you From the moment preschool started And from my care you departed I loved you From the moment we walked out the door And you were barely four I loved you From the moment you got hit by that car And took your little body so far I loved you From the moment your eyes did close And you left me alone with my woes I loved you From the moment you took your first breath And then until your death I loved you From the moment you did depart And until the last beat of my heart I loved you From the beginning And until the end I will always love you Contest: Name: Peyton Young Contest title: Any poem/Any form - for new poets of soup. Date: 30th November 2013

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Date: 11/28/2013 7:30:00 PM
Hi Peyton, how sweet the sound, a forever love standing its ground. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/28/2013 9:53:00 AM
Welcome Peyton to Ps, I am impressed by the art and great skill you put on this one, Hope to follow on more of your poems, for this its a master piece...Welcome to a family that will cherish and treasure your every effort..Rodgers Roger
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Date: 11/28/2013 4:29:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Peyton ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/27/2013 2:55:00 PM
Peyton, , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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