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I love you, Do you Love me too

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I love you, Do you Love me too

 I can see your pain, although you hide it well
Dear agony go away, yet continually hearts at swell.
Pain is the remedy, You are the notes
Soft and slow, your heart beat goes
I understand this pain, I understand your ways
I would block the memory out to, How have you held on for days
So strong you are, wisdom I can see
Courage is like gold, Rare and unseen
Im glad your heart has held on, and im glad you have turned to me
I promise you this, your heart has yet to see
I will be there, when time causes you to struggle
I will hold on even when the pain doubles
Your heart is attached, but is your mind aware
That even thought its the past, the memories are still there
I understand your worries, I understand your pain
But whats a sacrifice if your not willing to pay
Your past didnt last, but your future doesnt end
Your heart may be broken but baby it'll mend
I promise to be there, a friend at best
But have you noticed, the heart in my chest
It beats for you, slow and steady
Although this heart holds burden, for you Im ready
I want to be the choice, im tired of second best
Im tired of being choose last, as if I cant pass a test
I have been there for you, but now I need you
I need your love,  and everything that you do
Take my hand, I offer it to you
Accept my heart, as It offers the truth
I love you, one heart beat at a time
I offer you my love, in the form of a rhyme
I loved you first, gladly you accepted
Take this hand, forever romantic
Your pain will subside, your memories will fade
The heart aches will go away and the times of being played
I love you... Forever I do
I promise you my love, Do you promise yours too?

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  1. Date: 8/9/2011 2:59:00 AM
    This is great Trevor... it has a nice flow as welll. enjoyed the read!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 8/6/2011 11:47:00 PM
    Oh how Love unreturned does torture the soul...Nice write mate....with love....old Jack