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I love her to

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I love her to

I dont know how to act, whenever your around
I dont know what to do, whenever you melt down
I dont know what is wrong, whenever your sad
I dont know what to say, to make you happier than mad
I dont know much of anything at all
But I knew when you were about to fall

I picked you up, when no one else could
I carried you home, when nobody else thought they should
I felt you needed me, considering no one else was there
Your treated so wrong it's so unfair
I'd pick you up again, even if I couldn't
I'd carry you home again even if others wouldn't
All you did to me, I probably even shouldn't

I didn't know what to say, when you asked me out
I was scared to say yes, cause I didn't know what you were about
I didn't know how to react when you said you Loved me
I didn't know what love was, until you let me be
I felt what you felt, I knew what you were about
Thats when my heart flipped, I began to shout

But then I stopped, waited for the right time
To tell you how I felt in a couple of rhymes

I need you more, than you could ever know
It's love for you that I want to show
All because of god, he put us together, from heaven above
He wanted to show the world all about Love

You needed me, but now I need you
This is true
Without you Im blue
I know that you knew
That I was made for you
I read the clue
That no matter what you do
Forever and always my love will remain true

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  1. Date: 6/23/2010 7:22:00 AM
    Now this I can't even think of a word to use for it, this was such a sweet write, the way you started in the first stanza then you went to how you helped her out then she turned to you and fell in love,,, sweet, sweet write...P.D.

  1. Date: 6/22/2010 10:56:00 PM
    oh.....i love it!...so romantic.....:D