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I love you the best, but you LIE with your invites Leisurely you come to entice my taste bud and hijack my brain Oblivious to the addiction of sugary, fatty, salty foods Victorious you come out ahead, lucrative to my waist Eating for pleasure than hunger French fries crisp and delicious you cannot eat just one Oh, slathered with gooey cheese & pepperoni with sausage & tomato yummmmmm…. Onions rings, Cheese burgers, Bacon so loaded with what is bad -for -you my undoing Desirable cravings, makes my heart a beating, swooning for the meltinyourmouth good 6/29/2016 Contest: I love food Sponsored: Lewis Raynes

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Date: 7/1/2016 11:54:00 PM
Great poem Eve, you make me feel hungry, congrats. on the win, hope you are well, take care......Vera
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Date: 7/1/2016 8:15:00 AM
I'm going to the kitchen
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Date: 6/30/2016 3:04:00 PM
You list those food temptations so well, Eve! And, yes, they always seem to win! Congratulations on your win for this great Acrostic. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/30/2016 1:48:00 PM
Hmmm...sounds so nice! Congrats. :)
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Date: 6/30/2016 6:48:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 6/30/2016 12:22:00 AM
Luring into the coveted world of taste and flavor ... wonderful ...
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Date: 6/29/2016 8:30:00 PM
This is literally a "lip smacking" write with all the fixings!!! :-)
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Date: 6/29/2016 5:34:00 PM
You've got my full attention! Bacon! Gooey cheese! What time do we eat? I like your take on the contest. Good luck, Mrs Eve!
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Date: 6/29/2016 3:57:00 PM
hmmm, maybe I should another contest with this topic!!! Thanks for the idea!!Yum!!
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Date: 6/29/2016 1:55:00 PM
okay, you had me there, eve.. too delicious to pass those burgers so i'm off-diet now... a swell, tasty piece!..huggs
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