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I know you there

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I know you there

I know u there and i no what's going through your head
I know that u cant sleep tonight as your thoughts are running through your mind
I know what u want to do
I know you giving up but im not giving up on you

the more you fall the more you feel you cant get out
there is no window in u heart ache and pain
you suffering my dear friend and you want to die
you told me many things tonight that just made me cry
but still i know that u there

don't fade away
don't put off that light
don't shut you eyes and say good night
don't say goodbye
don't go
cause I now that you are there

my dear friend i no you strong
I know you will smile again
it will just take time
let out you'r pain
let out you'r words
speak my friend
you will be herd
as i know longer want to cry

please don't die don't choose that path
you better than that
please my friend
I'm begging you
I'm down on my knees
please
don't go
cause i know you there

i love you my friend

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  1. Date: 6/3/2009 6:49:00 AM
    Welcome to PoetrySoup Carly. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/30/2009 3:29:00 AM
    Hi Alley thank u so much for the welcome i am glad u liked the poem

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 6:57:00 PM
    Lovely poem! Welcome to the soup! -Alley

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 11:38:00 AM
    thank u friends

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 8:00:00 AM
    Beautiful.

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 7:26:00 AM
    Welcome to the soup, may you be a friend here forever. God bless you.

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 5:15:00 AM
    Relationship is built on mutual willingness ... I like your exploring of love and desire counterbalancing the relationship moment ... very original too. Nice write, my friend.