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I Know You There

I know u there and i no what's going through your head I know that u cant sleep tonight as your thoughts are running through your mind I know what u want to do I know you giving up but im not giving up on you the more you fall the more you feel you cant get out there is no window in u heart ache and pain you suffering my dear friend and you want to die you told me many things tonight that just made me cry but still i know that u there don't fade away don't put off that light don't shut you eyes and say good night don't say goodbye don't go cause I now that you are there my dear friend i no you strong I know you will smile again it will just take time let out you'r pain let out you'r words speak my friend you will be herd as i know longer want to cry please don't die don't choose that path you better than that please my friend I'm begging you I'm down on my knees please don't go cause i know you there i love you my friend

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Date: 1/20/2016 9:33:00 PM
Carly, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 6/3/2009 6:49:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Carly. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/30/2009 3:29:00 AM
Hi Alley thank u so much for the welcome i am glad u liked the poem
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Date: 5/29/2009 6:57:00 PM
Lovely poem! Welcome to the soup! -Alley
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Date: 5/29/2009 11:38:00 AM
thank u friends
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Date: 5/28/2009 8:00:00 AM
Beautiful.
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Date: 5/28/2009 7:26:00 AM
Welcome to the soup, may you be a friend here forever. God bless you.
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Date: 5/28/2009 5:15:00 AM
Relationship is built on mutual willingness ... I like your exploring of love and desire counterbalancing the relationship moment ... very original too. Nice write, my friend.
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