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I Just Found Out

I just found out how skin of day breathes in the grayness of Fall sky, as moist eyes fold to drop away on moonlit puffs that slowly die like mirrors crashed into the air, a splendor gliding down below, while tradewinds' draft glides off somewhere biting the night with sharpened jaw. My fingers trace sweet memory calling Jack’s name in every bloom while angels restore the glory of traces born from love’s heirloom; I pause… his Light perches on trees where we christened fire tasting rum, and though wonder passes through leaves the days will sift joys, dear husband. ------- For Susan’s ‘ I Just Found Out’ Contest *As narrated by my female cousin after her spouse passed on*

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Date: 5/8/2013 10:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win ~A.O
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Date: 5/6/2013 7:32:00 PM
I am sure she loves it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/6/2013 7:26:00 PM
Congratulations you are always a winner to me...
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Date: 4/30/2013 1:15:00 PM
I just found out that you are one of my favorite poets......You're unique, never chime in unnecessarily.....and I'm a fan...So thanks....
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Date: 4/28/2013 1:24:00 PM
Wow, this is beautiful Nette! It's always a pleasure to read your work. :)
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Date: 4/27/2013 11:03:00 PM
Very touching poem nette. Her sadness is heartfelt...Good luck Love Dalila
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Date: 4/27/2013 12:12:00 PM
Very touching poem by you here nette.Beautifully penned.
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Date: 4/27/2013 7:41:00 AM
Oh my heart just paused a bit....
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Date: 4/26/2013 4:26:00 PM
This is a tearful but also joyful experience my friend! You have brought a masterful piece of art to my heart with this incredible poem! What a glorious piece this poem truly is, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/26/2013 11:40:00 AM
This is a beautiful piece. Good luck on the contest.
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Date: 4/26/2013 11:31:00 AM
Nette, you have done a good work for this contest - A poem which will win! - It's rare that I post for contest, I write most for the pleasure of writing and to others who want to read what I write. - Wishing you a lovely weekend Nette - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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