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I have a Secret

I have a secret, the changing of time Affects me sublime, and opens me to The changing of blue to this lovely sign Of which I divine, the moon shines all through The fog entered into, each step I’m blind I reach every kind, the walkway is straight With fall leaves debate, I surely don’t mind I walk on them to grind, moon won’t abate The darkness all around depresses me I can sure see by the sound of the moon Not a flower to bloom, must be empty While it won’t be grumpy, surely too soon I don’t find a regret, where the power Resides in a tower, while it ensues I can’t breathe in the blue, it does shower Moon’s a ray of dower, just what we choose The land isn’t sound proof, is carries here The crickets do sheer, and cross barriers The gut can’t feel emptier, there’s no fear I grasp the fog’s tear, it cuts like daggers
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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 11:35:00 AM
    Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 8:29:00 AM
    Russell congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 8:45:00 PM
    Wow Russell...very interesting poem and form....brilliant

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 12:14:00 PM
    Congrats on your smashing win. Very unique. AO

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 2:44:00 PM
    Russell, a great secret to unravel all the way through... very mesmerizing and a little haunting. Love the last two lines especially :)

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 11:08:00 PM
    Congrats Russell on the win and the form....Seren

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:35:00 PM
    Russell, :-) Congratulations in my awesome SECRET contest. don't know if the secret is totally out. I'm loving all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 6:26:00 PM
    Deep and mysterious secret. I praise you on your imagination and originality. An inspiring write. I hope you're feeling better. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 10:05:00 AM
    Excellently done. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 10:01:00 AM
    Russell; I don't know much about this kind of poems. I really don't know much about anything, I just write what I feel, but this sounds really good. It will do good in the contest.God bless always ... Lucilla

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 12:34:00 AM
    Good to see you could do a poem on this topic. I guess I don't have anything to write on this topic. Very nice that you did it in this quatrain style, Russell.

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 4:00:00 PM
    Another very impressive write from one of my faves. Thank you so much my dear friend Russell for sharing. So love it & so enjoyed reading it this morning. Thank you so much as well for your very nice poetic comments on my latest poem. More power and blessings to you. Big hugs! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 10:29:00 AM
    certainly, a foggy secret which sneaks in at night....quite the vision here, russell... splendidly done as always... grreat job, my friend.. huggs!

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 8:00:00 AM
    Good job Russel, should do ver well.

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 7:56:00 AM
    Interesting work that you have penned in this one..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winning entry to me..Enjoyed floating through the lines..Thanks for the review of my work and the kind comments..Your presence is always welcomed..Sara

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:27:00 AM
    Impressive and captivating with the depth of a mystery! Good luck! 7!

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 8:53:00 PM
    lovely Russell gl in contest Shadow x smiles