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I Forgive

I forgive judges no place given in contest..... will try much harder. try so very hard to write only the best rhyme... my muse has left home must forgive myself come back muse you are needed .... home where the heart is penned 20/08/2016

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Sara Chansarkar

Date: 8/23/2016 12:54:00 PM

Haha, yes the muse is very fickle at times:)Loved your take on the contest Seren!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2016 2:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your second placement Seren! 7 ; )

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/22/2016 2:17:00 AM

This is a different approach to the theme. And I like that. Your prayers have been heard. Congratulations, Kai

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/21/2016 4:53:00 PM

Great take on the theme, Seren! Congratulations on your 2nd Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 8/21/2016 1:03:00 PM

Your theme made me LOL Seren we can all relate to this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/21/2016 1:03:00 PM

Thanks Jan was fun to write.....Seren

James Inman

Date: 8/21/2016 12:26:00 PM

A clever write, I like your interpretation of the theme Seren.

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/21/2016 1:05:00 PM

Thx James.....Seren

Lu Loo

Date: 8/21/2016 10:38:00 AM

Seren, this made me chuckle, the last line is the best...congrats on your placement and thank you very much for being a part of myc contest :)-luloo

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/21/2016 1:02:00 PM

Thx Laura yea I made the list...... Seren

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/20/2016 4:53:00 AM

Nice write ... and witty senryu ...

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/21/2016 1:06:00 PM

Haha Probir glad you liked it....Seren