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I Feel You Here

Lord, I feel your arms
wrap around my soul,
embracing this life
that I wish could just let go.

Though I've never seen your face
I still feel your breath,
drying my tears
when I cry into the deepest dark.

I know when I am alone
you are still here.
I sit on your lap
and you surround this pain.

I sit up at night
my heart torn in two,
but I feel an unseen warmth 
and know it must be you.

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  1. Date: 1/16/2010 4:40:00 PM
    Cheers! Excellent heartfelt piece-- ~Skyy

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 1:49:00 PM
    Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week >> James

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 8:26:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry, dear Betty. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 4:48:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Betty. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/10/2010 3:56:00 PM
    Hi Betty,Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty

  1. Date: 1/10/2010 1:22:00 PM
    Yes, God does see us through the tough times. Wonderful inspirational message. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Blessings to you. Karen

  1. Date: 1/10/2010 11:50:00 AM
    Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette