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You can go on that trip, my love I am allowing you to. The world is a vast and beautiful place So much to explore Without me We did so much together rode my wheels shared our bodies near the campfire With soft and tender arms Tamed broken pasts Cried and yelled at the moon and crushed nightmares Drank together and helped each other back to bed Sweetheart, I love you But I cannot bind you to me I see the longing in your eyes while you are watching these mountains those sunsets. I feel you drifting Like a traveller in time from my heart, from my love from my arms I will not keep you Freedom is important The wild roar of your heart is not for me anymore I am allowing you He is lovely So go, my love Climb that mountain in the sunset I will watch you with a smile and eternal love in my heart. *** January 18, 2017

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Date: 3/23/2017 7:37:00 AM
Rare heart can love that much.. Absolutely adorable poem, Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 3/23/2017 1:27:00 PM
Thank you, I love the poem too :)
Date: 1/19/2017 5:52:00 PM
I really liked this poem, however, I could feel the sadness in it! I hope it's not true!
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Darren White
Date: 1/20/2017 12:03:00 AM
No, it isn't Budgie, this was written for a prompt: write a poem using the picture, and this is what came to mind. My bf and I are perfectly fine :)
Date: 1/19/2017 3:41:00 AM
Wow... this is gorgeous my friend. And yes, that's how everything works in life - perfect one! <3 <3
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Darren White
Date: 1/19/2017 5:26:00 AM
Morning my sweet friend :) Yeah, that is how it should be :)
Date: 1/18/2017 3:51:00 PM
this is how to be . If you love someone, set them free. Hopefully they will admire you so much for this, they will come back and be there with you!! GReat poetry, Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 1/18/2017 11:07:00 PM
Yes, hopefully they will :) Thank you Andrea.
Date: 1/18/2017 10:25:00 AM
Wow Darren. I can feel the emotions in this one. Very well done.
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Darren White
Date: 1/18/2017 11:41:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi :)

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