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I Dream of Dreams

I dream of a place where dancers embrace, Waltzing together incipient lights, Music transposed echoed heavenly grace, Accompanies first harmonious nights; I dream of lilacs and lavender mist, Adrift susurrus shoreline’s infinite breeze, Flowing compassion through time reminisced, That journeys taken be traveled with ease: I dream of a whisper remembered well, Spoken in honeydew’s gentle caress, Promising lovers when broken-hearts swell, Friendship would mean there’s always forgiveness. I dream of a dream where happiness numbs, That dreams of a place where yesterday comes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/4/2017 3:59:00 PM
The Harmony of Waltz exudes itself in this one.
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Date: 9/22/2017 6:38:00 AM
This is a winning piece! You're such a talented poet, Phillip! :-)
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Date: 9/18/2017 5:31:00 PM
A Very beautifully written poem with such tender emotion enveloped in the content. Thank you.
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Date: 9/18/2017 12:59:00 PM
i am impressed,i can learn from you.
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Date: 5/13/2017 6:07:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 5/12/2017 3:53:00 AM
Hey my friend in the sauna! Congratulations :)
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Date: 5/11/2017 2:44:00 PM
Hello Philip, My favorite here was the ending and the fact you never lost a line with me. Keep Cool. Congratulations :) SKAT
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 5/11/2017 4:41:00 PM
Impossible to keep cool in this beeyatch of a sauna today but thanks for the high placement- good to hear from ya
Date: 10/12/2016 9:12:00 PM
Very nice-love it-
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Date: 10/7/2016 2:31:00 PM
This is a great sonnet Phillip, congrats on POTD! Very deserved! Dream on!
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Date: 10/7/2016 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations, Phillip on a well deserved POTD:) your sonnet is mind blowing:)
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Date: 10/6/2016 10:28:00 PM
Congrats for ur POTD honor.............//hugs
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Date: 10/6/2016 4:18:00 PM
This poem is so lovely Phillip. Big congratulations on your poem being honored for POTD! 7 ; )
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Date: 10/6/2016 3:10:00 PM
A stunner, dreamy poetry. Congrats on poem of the day, well deserved.
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Date: 10/6/2016 2:59:00 PM
Hi Phillip, This is lovely. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Enjoy the honor :-) Alexis
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Date: 10/6/2016 2:41:00 PM
Phillip this is a beautiful poem, I read it twice.
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Date: 10/6/2016 1:43:00 PM
Very Feminine and softly lilted. Blowing on breezes swirling and tilted.
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 10/6/2016 1:50:00 PM
Thank you and a gorgeous couplet. I'm writing it down to dance with later.
Date: 10/6/2016 10:58:00 AM
Wow, great, Phillip, congratulations on Poem of the Day
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Date: 10/6/2016 8:14:00 AM
I really enjoyed your poem! Awesome job! CONGRATS!!!!!
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Date: 10/6/2016 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD honors, Phillip. I love your beautiful sonnet. Absolute loveliness flowing from your pen. Great job my friend:) Soupmail!
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Date: 10/6/2016 7:33:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Phillip - Well deserved :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2016 7:26:00 AM
Congrats for a wonderful write and the POTD bonus honor...
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Date: 10/6/2016 4:16:00 AM
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 10/6/2016 6:24:00 AM
This is why 4am commentary is a bad idea
Date: 10/5/2016 9:18:00 AM
An excellent sonnet, Phillip:) how easily you write them:) I wish I could:) a fave and a 7:)
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Date: 10/4/2016 12:29:00 PM
- I can not point out one "special" beautiful line .... everyone is beautiful, Phillip !!! - A big 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 10/4/2016 4:44:00 PM
Lord. Trying to say it was kind of you to say but my thumbs aren't playing along
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 10/4/2016 4:43:00 PM
Thank you! Very kind of yoy
Date: 10/4/2016 10:34:00 AM
Wow.......Superb., Phillip. I was captivated from beginning to end. A lovely sonnet. A7 & A fav...........//hugs//Manmath........
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 10/4/2016 4:42:00 PM
Thank you very much for the lofty praise - it makes me feel good. Thank you
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