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I Don'T Want To Close My Eyes

I don’t want to close my eyes; I want to see your angelic face that glows with serenity and beauty, as you rest on your soft, cotton pillow I don’t want to close my eyes; I want to see you breathing gracefully throughout the night, as your chest gently moves upwards and downwards I don’t want to close my eyes; I just want to stare at the person who helped me to fill the puzzles that made me to drown in questions of what love really is, and the person is you, my love

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Date: 2/11/2016 9:55:00 PM
Beautiful lines, Teddy and so well expressed... Congrats on a great win!!
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Date: 2/8/2016 8:42:00 AM
As the theme of the contest says, it really is all about love! Congratulations Teddy on your well-deserved win! :) -HANS
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Date: 2/7/2016 7:23:00 PM
;)..linds
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Date: 2/6/2016 9:02:00 AM
anytime :) LINDA
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/7/2016 3:33:00 PM
*^_^* teddy
Date: 2/6/2016 6:21:00 AM
TEDDY, Stopped by to congratulate you on your awesome poem. **SKAT**
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/7/2016 3:39:00 PM
Thank you so much Skat! *^_^* <3
Date: 2/6/2016 2:18:00 AM
Teddy, Congratulations on your "it's all about love" win. Love LINDA
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/6/2016 3:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda! *^_^* <3
Date: 7/11/2015 7:26:00 AM
Very nice I enjoyed your poem congrats !
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/11/2015 7:33:00 AM
Thank you very much Lee! ;-)
Date: 7/11/2015 1:53:00 AM
Teddy, Congrats on your Any Old Poem #8 win. Always ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/11/2015 7:32:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause Linda! *^_^*
Date: 7/10/2015 6:47:00 PM
A beautiful write Teddy. I really enjoyed the read...congrats Tim
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/11/2015 7:31:00 AM
Thank you very much Tim! ;-)
Date: 7/10/2015 1:16:00 AM
Teddy, Congratulations, on your awesome win. SKAT
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/10/2015 10:25:00 AM
Thank you Skat! ;-) I enjoyed the contest! *^_^*

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