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I Don'T Break Hearts For a Living

How I miss the way we kissed- Our lips were locked and laced with bliss So why did our Love end like this? Never to be the way we had wished... Of sorrowed Hearts, to lament and mourn, Borrowed Hopes in Truth to burn The Rose of Love is thick with thorns: So when I'm pricked, so then I've learned *Every Rose has It's Thorn Contest

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Date: 4/2/2014 5:34:00 PM
HI CHAN, Congratulations on your winning poem.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/3/2014 11:42:00 AM
Thanks so much, hon :)
Date: 4/1/2014 1:29:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and nice take, congrats on the fine win, JTAP
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Date: 4/3/2014 11:43:00 AM
Many thanks as always, doc :)
Date: 3/31/2014 5:25:00 PM
I loved the depth of emotion in your words. The rhyming was wonderful, too! A really great poem, BP! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/3/2014 11:45:00 AM
Thanks for hosting a great contest, SP, and thanks for the placement; I sincerely appreciate it, hon :)
Date: 3/22/2014 3:21:00 PM
reading ... Light & Love
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Date: 10/23/2013 9:18:00 PM
:) Congratulations in The rose (Allegory) contest................. SKAT
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Date: 10/24/2013 9:22:00 AM
Thanks, Skat! :)
Date: 10/22/2013 11:16:00 PM
Just That Archaic, . CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA
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Date: 10/23/2013 7:00:00 AM
Thanks, Linda ;)
Date: 10/16/2013 4:29:00 AM
Written with a most talented pen... my heart feels more than my words can express.... Congratulations.... Jake
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Date: 10/16/2013 7:46:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words, John; they warm my heart :)
Date: 10/15/2013 6:31:00 PM
I like this winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/16/2013 7:47:00 AM
Thank you, and much appreciated, Sara :)
Date: 10/15/2013 3:48:00 PM
Absolute beauty , Great job ! congratulations !
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Date: 10/16/2013 7:47:00 AM
I sincerely appreciate it, Shanity; thank you! :)
Date: 10/15/2013 8:08:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, AP
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Date: 10/16/2013 7:48:00 AM
Thanks as always, Doc! ;)
Date: 10/15/2013 7:03:00 AM
Congrats on your placement! Such beauty and sadness...Have a great day...Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/15/2013 7:22:00 AM
Thanks, Rhonda; I appreciate it. Hope you have a great day as well, and much love to you! :)

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