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I Die For You

I live for you A rebirth Your silence kills me You are a murderer of love You see not the amour before your eyes You are too busy running, running Lust chases you away You are a criminal of the frigid Let not the judges rule over you Let me free you Come to me Let our intercourse transverse through your veins Let a single kiss ignite a fire Of cold hearts Needing warmth I hold you in my arms I kiss you again Softly You may look out to the seas Over the hills The foggy glens You shall never see what you seek Till you kiss The depth of me

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/13/2014 4:12:00 PM

such beauty in this powerful write Arthur :-) Hugs Jan wish I could give you ten but its a 7 from me:-) xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/13/2014 9:15:00 PM

Its ok Jan you can mail me the other 3 LOL :) Hugs

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/13/2014 3:40:00 PM

excellent piece of writing arthur very beautifully penned dear friend

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/13/2014 9:14:00 PM

Thanks liam, much appreciated

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/13/2014 8:02:00 AM

Amazing write Arthur! Powerful words here, loved much!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/13/2014 9:13:00 PM

Thank you so much Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/12/2014 11:28:00 PM

Oh Arthur, the intensity of your words builds into a crescendo of breathless beauty in your magnificent ending! I loved this!#7

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/13/2014 8:19:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie, much appreciated!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/12/2014 10:39:00 PM

ONE OF YOUR ABSOLUTELY BEST! I'm with Cas on that line...OH YES! Loved this piece. I loved the strength of your words...the domineering spirit. yes!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/13/2014 8:19:00 PM

ONE of? And here I thought they all were!!!!!! Hugs Eileen

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/12/2014 10:31:00 PM

Very beautiful romantic pen Arthur! filled of so much passion and fire, dear friend.A 7 for you! Have a great weekend! :) Love and hugs! Xxxxx D.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/13/2014 8:18:00 PM

Thank you so much Dorian, hugs right back to you!

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/12/2014 9:19:00 PM

"let our intercourse transverse through your veins" okay I'm in where do I sign the contract? What an interesting mix of emotions, needs and fulfillments. awesome babe, you rock.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/12/2014 9:23:00 PM

Sign up? Oh thats what that line is!!!!! ( in my dreams ) but never the less very kind of you!! Hugs

Meg Anderson

Date: 12/12/2014 8:58:00 PM

Arthur, ohh your words are chilling! Very passionate write! I loved it. Meg

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/12/2014 9:22:00 PM

Thank you so much Meg