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I Cry

First a sigh begins the sequence Then pain impales my tender heart My lips kissed with trembles quiver And teardrops fall for worlds apart Disenchanted by fallen expectations A siege estrange's my view Breached by every implication Want replaced substance I once knew Lamentation's silent scream Stripped of dignity's stoic face About the time when shadows cast Lucent pangs suppressed by weakened gates I cry... Sequestered only by my right For I have earned each taste of salt Which springs from wretched ferocity of plight Concealed in my empirical vault Lest wiped is the dampness off my skin By one who has no portion divvied For I have owned each drop therein Knowing not relief in empath's pity Tomorrow's morn will dawn and then This "woe -is - me" will pass A radiant sunrise will remind me of when Faith dwelled securely in my grasp Gratitude shall seize my debt Affixing credit for emancipation For tears command that they be let To cure the souls vexation Therefore, yes... I CRY :" (

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Date: 1/20/2014 11:48:00 AM
Your words literally wrench and tear at the very core of emotion. You've carefully chosen words that not only convey the heart's longing, but also the courage to carry home. Yes, crying, but advancing absent defeat. Tears disperse the chemicals of sorrow, so are necessary for us to feel good again. Much enjoyed.
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Date: 1/16/2014 8:53:00 PM
This poem has me beyond words. (7)
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Sarai Virden
Date: 1/19/2014 4:29:00 AM
I'm so glad this moved you JT. Thanks so much for leaving me a comment expressing your thoughts.
Date: 1/15/2014 9:47:00 AM
so deep and very beautifully penned god bless
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Sarai Virden
Date: 1/19/2014 4:27:00 AM
Many blessing to you my friend. Even through tears I am blessed beyond measure.
Date: 1/15/2014 7:41:00 AM
Deeply moving Sarai. :'( very passionate too!
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Sarai Virden
Date: 1/19/2014 4:25:00 AM
Thank you sweetheart :-)
Date: 1/15/2014 7:18:00 AM
Aww so sad... don't be sad, my sweet Sarai! My shoulder awaits you! Sad but with a promise of joy ahead as your "woe-is-me" will pass! Love you sweet lady... huggeroonies XOXOXOX
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Sarai Virden
Date: 1/19/2014 4:24:00 AM
Joy always comes in the morning my sweet Jack E. Nothin a little swing dancing can't fix lol :-)

Book: Shattered Sighs