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i couldnt

i couldnt ease your pain
the day your brother died
all i could do was hold you 
and along with you i cried

i know your heart is broken
cause your love for him went unspoken
but i believe he,s looking down
from heaven up on high
in time you,ll start to heal 
from having to tell your brother goodbye

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  1. Date: 9/16/2010 10:28:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry today Debbie. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/15/2010 4:47:00 PM
    a sad write, but how lucky for him to have you by his time of need, enjoyed your write..P.D.