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I Choose My Life

I chose my life, I chose my life the way it is; the way it's supposed to be I rebuffed for every sanity unto me yet you assert to lessen all my fret. I confront plights every moment though I had a valor in me to conquer and triumph whenever on my way through the tutelage I have gotten the institution. I chose it from the sphere from myriad choices it is my brain which is my final discernment I chose my life I chose my life the way it is way supposed to be

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2016 1:36:00 PM

nice to see this one again, Elyas...linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/20/2015 2:08:00 PM

- A very well written poem - With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup, Elyas :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/20/2015 12:13:00 AM

A nice strong poem to introduce yourself, Elya, and welcome to Poetry Soup. I'm sure that you'll have a great time here, sharing and reading your work with our happy band of 'Soupers' around the world. Enjoy. Viv

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/19/2015 8:57:00 PM

Hi Elyas,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 7/19/2015 5:33:00 PM

I love your confidence that shows in your poem. Elyas welcome to psoup and good day.

Elyas Ali
Date: 7/19/2015 6:59:00 PM

thank you very much Njeri, by saying "your confidence" that really puts me a confidence and wants to publish more. Again thank you.

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2015 1:12:00 PM

Elyas, a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Elyas Ali
Date: 7/19/2015 7:01:00 PM

Hey skat, thats sounds cool. we will be friends and i am glad i had some one who cares.