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I Can Never Stop Seeking You

That I am this, A pause. Waiting until You and I Are us and we. Fingers knitted, Cuddled close. Away from you I am a locus. A spark Which blinds. Overwhelming With every Thought of you. Apart from you, I only need To follow The desire Of; my heart Only knows you Are what is missing

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/19/2015 3:32:00 PM

what a lovely romantic write I especially love the final stanza :-) hugs jan xx

Courtney Courtney

Date: 6/18/2015 2:01:00 AM

I like your style

Neil Nelson
Date: 6/18/2015 11:09:00 PM

Thank you Courtney ^^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/16/2015 4:53:00 AM

- Welcome to P -Soup, Neil :) - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I see you have already posted several poems - Enjoy a place with many different "poets" - // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 6/15/2015 1:33:00 AM

Neil, a wonderful write:), this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Neil Nelson
Date: 6/15/2015 2:45:00 PM

Thanks SKAT :) got a lot of love to try and articulate right now so hoping to trickle a poem every few days at the moment o/

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2015 11:47:00 PM

Neil, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Neil Nelson
Date: 6/15/2015 2:46:00 PM

Evening Linda, thanks for the compliment and welcome. More coming soon <3