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I Can Love You

I can love you from afar I don’t need to hear your voice Or feel your breath upon my cheek But its hard, so hard I can love you from afar And watch the seasons pass The dust of years settle on my heart But its hard, the ache of regret I can love you from afar Hoping you smile in the sunlight And gather round you those you love But its hard, I know the face of loneliness I can love you from afar And I will, without pride in my jealousy For I have no say in this It is hard, but then it was hard back then...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/22/2015 12:10:00 PM
this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 7/24/2015 3:43:00 PM
Thank you for visiting this older piece..it was a lovely surprise. Barbara
Date: 4/30/2015 8:00:00 PM
Barbara, ONCE AGAIN Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 4/27/2015 3:59:00 PM
So sad, Barbara, but so well-written with so much emotion. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/27/2015 2:13:00 PM
oh this is sad Barbara - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/27/2015 11:14:00 AM
Hey, congrats. Nice write.
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Date: 4/26/2015 10:14:00 PM
Barbara, Congrats on your awesome win! ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/26/2015 9:33:00 PM
Congratulations Barbara on your win with this fine write.
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Date: 4/24/2015 11:10:00 PM
I'm not sure if I remembered to rate it. So I doing it again just be sure. Haha, sorry about that.
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Date: 4/24/2015 11:09:00 PM
I'm giving this a 7. I really enjoy how open-ended it is, and how it leaves me wondering. Great poem.
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