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I Came Upon a Shimmering Pond

I came upon a shimmering pond And cast my line in deep Set me down on the dock nearby And dangled my aching feet My mind goes back to earlier days When in smaller ponds this boy did play Where polliwogs were there to be caught Before herbicides and pesticides wiped them all away Now frogs no longer hop about for a determined boy to chase Times when we strolled down quiet tree lined country lanes Before streets with traffic lights came and took their place A time when neighbors helped neighbors and folks had time to chat Sunday dinner was a family affair with aunts, uncles and cousins there A time when a gentleman met a lady he always tipped his hat But that was then and times do change and I guess that’s alright But one thing has not changed nary a bit I still have not gotten a single bite.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/3/2016 12:34:00 AM
Ah!!! Thank you for the trip down memory lane, Donald. Loved your hilarious ending!
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 2/3/2016 11:30:00 AM
Elaine; It is always great to know that someone has taken their time to view any of my work and to then also comment on that work. I appreciate that.
Date: 1/3/2015 8:57:00 AM
Solid 7 on this great write.. I too, remember those bygone days. Days spent out in Nature, exploring its mysteries. I had pet toads, frogs , snakes spiders, crayfish, etc..
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Date: 8/17/2014 1:25:00 AM
You have captured a nice moment of reflection and remembrance as you were sitting near that pond.... This brought back memories and made me long for the innocent days of my childhood.... A lovely write, Donald! I really enjoyed reading this nostalgic poem!
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Date: 8/16/2014 8:21:00 PM
Nice poem Donald, so easy to read, loved it, take care my friend....................Vera.........
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 8/16/2014 10:22:00 PM
I really do appreciate everyone's comments but especially those from my loyal readers, the Duggans.

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